Introduction
Believe it or not a million immigrants enter into the U.S each year . mexico is main source of immigrants . can you imagine this number ? thousand and thousands of people move from their countries to other countries because of what ? of course there are a lot of reasons such as the improvement of their income or wars and so on . immigrants have a lot of benefits for any place the live in . immigrants increase the demand of goods and services which will make the prices of goods cheaper .other benefits are that immigrants do jobs that natives do not do and finally that high skilled immigrants they improve the countries they moved to in many ways .
Conclusion
Immigration improve the local and global economy . immigration has a lot of benefits for the economy some people think they have a negative effect on the country but truth is they decrease the prices of goods and the cost of living . they do ant jobs that native do not .the economic benefits from high skilled immigrants. One last thing I want to add that any human has the right to live wherever he want and has the right to seek for better life so we shouldn’t take the right form him I don’t believe in border.
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1 comments:
Hashil
Asking rhetorical questions ("thousand and thousands of people move from their countries to other countries because of what ?" for example)is a very effective rhetorical strategy for beginning drafts. Stating these questions helps you to organize the content of your essay; as you keep working, try to phase these questions out by answering them. Instead of saying " thousand and thousands of people move from their countries to other countries because of what ?", provide an answer to this question.
Also, is there one sentence you could add at the end of your introduction as a preliminary thesis? So far, you have a lot of good support--a great evaluation of your topic--but work on summing up the entire essay in one or two sentences.
The conclusion is good, too; remember that conclusions aim to re-establish your point in writing and to prove why your argument is correct.
Good start!
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