Introduction
Non-Verbal Communication
Non-verbal communication is a social science known as the “body language” in which researchers try to reveal what the human soul hide, and trying to figure it out. They use simple rules to analyze the body language by the face and hand expression, eye contact, and the tone of voice. However, men and women have different body language that could affect their dating, marriage, and social circles.
Conclusion
Overall, the researchers believe that many of the human unconscious body movements can reflect what their thinking or feeling. They are not easily understood by others, or can be misunderstood. So, how do men and women communicate differently using body language it is truly will affect them in dating, marriage and social circles. Therefore, everyone should know how to use body language in a correct way to avoid any kind of relationships failure.
Yousef Almansoori
1 comments:
Yousef,
Your introduction is full of good information! I like that you start directly addressing the topic at hand, and that you have a clear thesis. Work on developing topic sentences, though. Topic sentences are less specific than your thesis, but still work to support it. They are usually pieces of information that everyone can relate to and enjoy. Defining body language might help and presenting examples might help.
You are off to a good start with your conclusion as well. I wanted you to draft your conclusion before you researched because doing so will help you to establish the types of things you'd like to research for the essay itself: unconscious body movements, what people are thinking or feeling, misunderstandings and the different uses of body language are all examples of topics with which you could expand your essay. These subjects could also help you establish topic sentences and examples for your introduction.
All in all, good work.
Ben
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